I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
My name is Natasha, I'm a year 11 from Hornby High and I have the honour of checking out some of your guy's blog posts for the Summer Learning Journey over the holidays. My end goal is to offer you a bit of feedback which you can use to improve your posts. I gotta say, this post really stuck out!
I think your Youtube channel would be a big hit! Some people don't acknowledge it, but being a Youtuber - consistently coming up with new ideas, turning those ideas into content that continues to entertain people - it isn't an easy as it sounds! People in this line of work (Youtube, comedy, podcasts, other entertainers) deserve far more credit for their work!
I really like that you've chosen to use Biteable to present what you'd do if you had a Youtube channel. I've never used it before! You've also gone into a fair amount of detail and taken your readers through the step by step process, well done! You've given a great explanation :)
In future, could you perhaps put a bit of information about the Summer Learning Journey at the top of your post? It can be a massive help for those of your viewers who don't know too much about it!
So, would you want to be a famous Youtuber?
Fantastic work Marsali, I look forward to seeing what you come up with next :)
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Marsali!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Natasha, I'm a year 11 from Hornby High and I have the honour of checking out some of your guy's blog posts for the Summer Learning Journey over the holidays. My end goal is to offer you a bit of feedback which you can use to improve your posts. I gotta say, this post really stuck out!
I think your Youtube channel would be a big hit! Some people don't acknowledge it, but being a Youtuber - consistently coming up with new ideas, turning those ideas into content that continues to entertain people - it isn't an easy as it sounds! People in this line of work (Youtube, comedy, podcasts, other entertainers) deserve far more credit for their work!
I really like that you've chosen to use Biteable to present what you'd do if you had a Youtube channel. I've never used it before! You've also gone into a fair amount of detail and taken your readers through the step by step process, well done! You've given a great explanation :)
In future, could you perhaps put a bit of information about the Summer Learning Journey at the top of your post? It can be a massive help for those of your viewers who don't know too much about it!
So, would you want to be a famous Youtuber?
Fantastic work Marsali, I look forward to seeing what you come up with next :)