I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Congratulations on completing another activity! :)
What a fantastic post! I can tell you've put a lot of time and effort into creating this Google Slide, Marsali. I'm very impressed. I particularly like how you've shared what your characters and locations would look like. Would you movie be animated? Have you thought about which actors you'd have be the voices of Mr and Mrs Jolly, Holly and Lolly?
Have a wonderful day, Marsali. I can't wait to read more posts from you soon! :)
Hello again, Marsali It's me Nadia, here again to comment on another one of your epic posts for the SLJ 2020! Wow! Great job on this post Marsali, I see you have taken a lot of time to make a post that is really interesting. It must have taken a lot of effort to create this Marsali! I really like how you created something that is interesting and anyone can understand.
Next time I suggest to you to include where you got any images from. Just to avoid anyone thinking you plagiarized those images.
Great job on this post Marsali! Keep up the amazing work Until next time - Nadia :)
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Mōrena Marsali,
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on completing another activity! :)
What a fantastic post! I can tell you've put a lot of time and effort into creating this Google Slide, Marsali. I'm very impressed. I particularly like how you've shared what your characters and locations would look like. Would you movie be animated? Have you thought about which actors you'd have be the voices of Mr and Mrs Jolly, Holly and Lolly?
Have a wonderful day, Marsali. I can't wait to read more posts from you soon! :)
Mā te wā,
Mikey
Hello again, Marsali
ReplyDeleteIt's me Nadia, here again to comment on another one of your epic posts for the SLJ 2020!
Wow! Great job on this post Marsali, I see you have taken a lot of time to make a post that is really interesting. It must have taken a lot of effort to create this Marsali!
I really like how you created something that is interesting and anyone can understand.
Next time I suggest to you to include where you got any images from. Just to avoid anyone thinking you plagiarized those images.
Great job on this post Marsali!
Keep up the amazing work
Until next time
- Nadia :)