I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
It's me again, here to check out another one of your awesome blog posts. They just keep getting better and better!
I really like your presentation, Marsali! The colour scheme is really pretty, the font is beautiful, and the information you've included is awesome. I also appreciate that you've added a link into your slideshow which takes your viewers to a site where they can find out about how Billie became famous, well done! The addition you made on the third slide is quite cool too!
If you were looking for ways to improve your already amazing posts and presentations, a cool little thing to add would be a video - maybe an interview, or even better one of her music videos!
Is Billie Eilish your favourite singer? I quite like a lot of her music too, my sister use to listen to her all the time - I've learnt a fair few of her songs on piano! My favourite songs by her are 'Bellyache' and 'Lovely' which one of her songs is your favourite?
Great work Marslai, I look forward to seeing more fantastic posts from you in the future and I hope to hear from you soon. Have a great afternoon :)
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Marsali!
ReplyDeleteIt's me again, here to check out another one of your awesome blog posts. They just keep getting better and better!
I really like your presentation, Marsali! The colour scheme is really pretty, the font is beautiful, and the information you've included is awesome. I also appreciate that you've added a link into your slideshow which takes your viewers to a site where they can find out about how Billie became famous, well done! The addition you made on the third slide is quite cool too!
If you were looking for ways to improve your already amazing posts and presentations, a cool little thing to add would be a video - maybe an interview, or even better one of her music videos!
Is Billie Eilish your favourite singer? I quite like a lot of her music too, my sister use to listen to her all the time - I've learnt a fair few of her songs on piano! My favourite songs by her are 'Bellyache' and 'Lovely' which one of her songs is your favourite?
Great work Marslai, I look forward to seeing more fantastic posts from you in the future and I hope to hear from you soon. Have a great afternoon :)