I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora te aha, first of all I love your description of the earth's layers.Second I liked your input of ideas.Have you considered adding in facts in your last side how did you get this done in time?
Hi it's Cody first of all great facts you brought me back to when I made one I enjoyed slide3 because you had good facts how come you diden't put facts on slide 4 ok bye.
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Kia ora te aha, first of all I love your description of the earth's layers.Second I liked your input of ideas.Have you considered adding in facts in your last side how did you get this done in time?
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Hi it's Cody first of all great facts you brought me back to when I made one I enjoyed slide3 because you had good facts how come you diden't put facts on slide 4 ok bye.
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