I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia Ora Marsali Trinity here. I like your blog post about love. I love my family too. Maybe next time you could add your next step, question, and maybe a longer information part at the top?
Kia Ora Marsali I like your blog post about love. Maybe next time you could add your next step, question, and maybe a longer information part at the top?
kia ora Marsali, i very confused of what is going on in this whakaata(slide) anyway did you mean pops not poos or did you mean poos? i need to know tēnā! anyway i really cool i love it anyway i have to go bye, any
Kia Ora Marsali Lacie here. I like your blog post about love. I love my family too. Maybe next time you could add your next step, question, Did you mean pops not poos or did you mean poos?
Hi its Ethan I it was cool that u have been telling every one to love things cause some humans that dont love things they are rude but then did u mean poos or something as but have a good day
Kia ora marsali you did a great job on this slide and i really like the last slide marsali you are amazing good job Marsali maybe next time you could work on clear writing making it pretty and when you do you blog post put more details on the introduction and do your next step and of course ask a question for the people good job on this and good bye.
Kia Ora, Marsali! I like your post and love IS very important to humans. But next time, you could add some more information, or more description about it, and did you mean pops instead of poos? Something else, why did you make this? For class or in your own time? From Mikayla.
Kia Ora Marsali! I am VERY flabbergasted that the word "poos" was in there. Did you mean "pops" instead of the other word? Next time you could add more information for love. But great job!
Kia ora Marsali, Good job! You have done so well, I'm very FLABBERGASTED. Next time you could add why you did this, Why did you do this? When did you do this? I think you have done very well, bye.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Marsali Trinity here.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about love. I love my family too.
Maybe next time you could add your next step, question, and maybe a longer information part at the top?
Blog you later~Trinity.
Kia Ora Marsali I like your blog post about love. Maybe next time you could add your next step, question, and maybe a longer information part at the top?
ReplyDeletekia ora Marsali,
ReplyDeletei very confused of what is going on in this whakaata(slide) anyway did you mean pops not poos or did you mean poos? i need to know tēnā! anyway i really cool i love it
anyway i have to go bye,
any
please don't mind the any at the bottom please!
DeleteKia Ora Marsali Lacie here.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about love. I love my family too.
Maybe next time you could add your next step, question, Did you mean pops not poos or did you mean poos?
Hi its Ethan I it was cool that u have been telling every one to love things cause some humans that dont love things they are rude but then did u mean poos or something as but have a good day
ReplyDeleteKia ora marsali you did a great job on this slide and i really like the last slide marsali you are amazing good job Marsali maybe next time you could work on clear writing making it pretty and when you do you blog post put more details on the introduction and do your next step and of course ask a question for the people good job on this and good bye.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora, Marsali!
ReplyDeleteI like your post and love IS very important to humans. But next time, you could add some more information, or more description about it, and did you mean pops instead of poos? Something else, why did you make this? For class or in your own time?
From Mikayla.
Kia Ora Marsali!
ReplyDeleteI am VERY flabbergasted that the word "poos" was in there. Did you mean "pops" instead of the other word? Next time you could add more information for love. But great job!
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Marsali,
ReplyDeleteGood job! You have done so well, I'm very FLABBERGASTED. Next time you could add why you did this, Why did you do this? When did you do this? I think you have done very well, bye.