I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Ello Mars!I have a question: What other comics do you read other than the Scooby doo ones? also why don't you go outside when its sunny?? What fruits do you like? Also I really like how you talked about what your favortie books are. Maybe next time re-read your writing because I got stuck at when you wrote I like eating food and food, But I don't know if you did that on purpose. Anyway other than that its amazing! Bye!!
Hello Soheilla thxs for commenting on my blog I read lots more than scooby doo comics but I forget the names that was one that was just in my head. I don't like going outside in the sunny weather because I will start to get hot and I don't like the feeling. I did not mean to do that thank you for you feedback I will re-read next time thank you and my fav fruit is kiwi fruit Bye Soheilla bye!!!!
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Ello Mars!I have a question: What other comics do you read other than the Scooby doo ones? also why don't you go outside when its sunny?? What fruits do you like? Also I really like how you talked about what your favortie books are. Maybe next time re-read your writing because I got stuck at when you wrote I like eating food and food, But I don't know if you did that on purpose. Anyway other than that its amazing! Bye!!
ReplyDeleteHello Soheilla thxs for commenting on my blog
DeleteI read lots more than scooby doo comics but I forget the names that was one that was just in my head.
I don't like going outside in the sunny weather because I will start to get hot and I don't like the feeling. I did not mean to do that thank you for you feedback I will re-read next time thank you and my fav fruit is kiwi fruit
Bye Soheilla bye!!!!