I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
My name is Shannon, and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
You’ve done a gorgeous job painting these flowers. They look so bright and lively, especially in contrast to the original painting. The red you’ve used is beautiful and makes the flowers all pop against the yellow background and vase. It looks phenomenal!
Roses are a beautiful flower, but my favourites are tulips. I think they look incredible, and I’ve always wanted to go to Holland where they grow rows and rows of tulips in coloured order. The fields look breathtaking. What’s your favourite type of flower?
Good job on starting the Summer Learning Journey, I look forward to seeing all your future blog posts! What activities are you most excited for?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Marsali,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Shannon, and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
You’ve done a gorgeous job painting these flowers. They look so bright and lively, especially in contrast to the original painting. The red you’ve used is beautiful and makes the flowers all pop against the yellow background and vase. It looks phenomenal!
Roses are a beautiful flower, but my favourites are tulips. I think they look incredible, and I’ve always wanted to go to Holland where they grow rows and rows of tulips in coloured order. The fields look breathtaking. What’s your favourite type of flower?
Good job on starting the Summer Learning Journey, I look forward to seeing all your future blog posts! What activities are you most excited for?
Ka kite anō,
Shannon (SLJ)