I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hey girl. This blog post is so cool I never knew that you were a really good drawer, this picture is flabbergasting! This is amazing but I think you could put the picture a little bit closer to the camera so then we can see a better. Maybe next time you could put a little bit more of a description so then we know how you do that how long it took you and things like that. How did you come up with the idea of making the picture into a sea? -Daisy
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Hey girl.
ReplyDeleteThis blog post is so cool I never knew that you were a really good drawer, this picture is flabbergasting!
This is amazing but I think you could put the picture a little bit closer to the camera so then we can see a better.
Maybe next time you could put a little bit more of a description so then we know how you do that how long it took you and things like that.
How did you come up with the idea of making the picture into a sea?
-Daisy