I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
thank you guys it was hard to do but it was fun Ailis well I hope she does one to because I hope she will have fun like me if she does one I loved doing it and Ms Raisin you should do one to I think.
Kia ora Marsali. This is great. I love it. Is it ok if I show Whakamanawa? I think it will be a good idea and they will be wanting to get creative like that too.
yes you can Whakamanawa I added more to it so you can look at it again and there were some mistakes so I fixed them so if you look at it you will see my mistakes are gone.
This is cool Marsali, I commented on this last week but somehow it has not posted.So I just wanted to let you know I enjoyed it.I did have a lille trouble reading the red font on the last slide.I also thought that the slide -one eternity later -was an excellent tool in your storytelling.Good job.Stay awesome.
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Marsali... Ailis and I absolutely loved that! What a great idea. "Do another" was Ailis' response. (I told her she should do one for you!)
ReplyDeletethank you guys it was hard to do but it was fun Ailis well I hope she does one to because I hope she will have fun like me if she does one I loved doing it and Ms Raisin you should do one to I think.
DeleteChallenge accepted! I'll put my thinking cap on to see what I can come up with!!!
Deleteya cool
DeleteKia ora Marsali. This is great. I love it. Is it ok if I show Whakamanawa? I think it will be a good idea and they will be wanting to get creative like that too.
ReplyDeleteyes you can Whakamanawa I added more to it so you can look at it again and there were some mistakes so I fixed them so if you look at it you will see my mistakes are gone.
DeleteMiss waho and Ms Raisin I have edit it so there is more
Deletehi marsali i like ur slide
DeleteThis is cool Marsali, I commented on this last week but somehow it has not posted.So I just wanted to let you know I enjoyed it.I did have a lille trouble reading the red font on the last slide.I also thought that the slide -one eternity later -was an excellent tool in your storytelling.Good job.Stay awesome.
ReplyDeletethank you
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