I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
as i was looking through you slide i saw that you been copy and pasting from google,maybe next time instead of copy and pasting you could just Write it in your own words next time. But besides that your blog post is amazing it tells me all about maui. What did you enjoy about making this post what do you like the most about your post? #AWESOME~CHRISTINA
Kia ora Marsali how are you?? i like your maui and the sun it is awesome i like it. But there was a little mistake. when you spelled brother you spelled it wrong and some other words. Do you know anything else??
i love your blog about Maui and the sun and did you know how amazing you did and Maybe you could do a story about maui and remember you can Write your own words instead copying and pasting it! I love it~ Bea
i love your blog about Maui and the sun and did you know how amazing you did and Maybe you could do a story about maui and remember you can Write your own words instead copying and pasting it! I love it p.s.ts Connor A
hello marsil its brodie here i enjoyed going throw your slide.did you think about putting a full stop on slide 6.Why did you put this on your blog ok bye.
hey Marsali that is a good idea of doing a slide about maui but you did some mistakes and you copy and paste something from online I would have loved if you wrote this your self but it was still an awesome Idea well blog you later
Kia ora Marsali, I like your blog post because it is descriptive and you put the story of Maui. I liked that you put some pictures and that the slide explained the story. You could proofread next time and fix up some of your spelling next time so it's easier to read.
Hello Marsali its Ethan H from Gilberthorpe school, I like your slide about Maui and the sun it is really interesting with all the images and stuff. My favourite part it the one with all the info it is really interesting. Maybe next time and a bit more info in all the slides. Bye!
Hello Marsali this post was interesting. I like how you told me the story of the Maui and the sun. Next time you could get someone to help you spell better. Do you know anymore Maui stories?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
hi marsali next time you should do what we were meant to do in stead of a movie
ReplyDeleteI did not do a movie I did my work
DeleteKia ora Marsali, Christina here.
ReplyDeleteas i was looking through you slide i saw that you been copy and pasting from google,maybe next time instead of copy and pasting you could just Write it in your own words next time. But besides that your blog post is amazing it tells me all about maui. What did you enjoy about making this post what do you like the most about your post? #AWESOME~CHRISTINA
Kia ora Marsali how are you??
ReplyDeletei like your maui and the sun it is awesome i like it. But there was a little mistake. when you spelled brother you spelled it wrong and some other words. Do you know anything else??
Kia ore Marsil,
ReplyDeletei love your blog about Maui and the sun and did you know how amazing you did and Maybe you could do a story about maui and remember you can Write your own words instead copying and pasting it! I love it~ Bea
i love your blog about Maui and the sun and did you know how amazing you did and Maybe you could do a story about maui and remember you can Write your own words instead copying and pasting it! I love it p.s.ts Connor A
ReplyDeleteHi it is Jonte here i would like to say that i like you're slide about the movie Moana and Maui and blog you later...
ReplyDeletehello marsil its brodie here i enjoyed going throw your slide.did you think about putting a full stop on slide 6.Why did you put this on your blog ok bye.
ReplyDeletehi marsali
ReplyDeletei liked the way you the lava words on the front
you brought me back litacy when you did it
next time you could put more wow words
bye
hi it's me dom and i think it was great idea but i think moana is not part of the maui and sun
ReplyDeletehey Marsali that is a good idea of doing a slide about maui but you did some mistakes and you copy and paste something from online I would have loved if you wrote this your self but it was still an awesome Idea well blog you later
ReplyDeleteKia ora Marsali,
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post because it is descriptive and you put the story of Maui. I liked that you put some pictures and that the slide explained the story. You could proofread next time and fix up some of your spelling next time so it's easier to read.
Hello Marsali its Ethan H from Gilberthorpe school,
ReplyDeleteI like your slide about Maui and the sun it is really interesting with all the images and stuff. My favourite part it the one with all the info it is really interesting. Maybe next time and a bit more info in all the slides. Bye!
Hello Marsali this post was interesting. I like how you told me the story of the Maui and the sun. Next time you could get someone to help you spell better. Do you know anymore Maui stories?
ReplyDeleteno sorry
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