I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia orana Marsali. Wow! You have done so much work on this Cook Islands slide. The clips you have included are interesting and fun. I love the pictures that you added. They really make me want to go there. Next time, make sure that any text you use is in your own writing or you know what it says and means. Some parts of your text look like they are copied and pasted from somewhere. What was the most interesting thing that you learned about the Cook Islands? Do you think you would like to go there?
Kia ora Marsali,its Daisy and Aria here! We liked the way you used your own words and put some cool videos. We think you could put more info of your own instead of a lot of videos. Ok. Next time you could look at what the internet says and then put it in your own words. Why did you put a lot of videos on your slide??????
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia orana Marsali.
ReplyDeleteWow! You have done so much work on this Cook Islands slide. The clips you have included are interesting and fun. I love the pictures that you added. They really make me want to go there.
Next time, make sure that any text you use is in your own writing or you know what it says and means. Some parts of your text look like they are copied and pasted from somewhere.
What was the most interesting thing that you learned about the Cook Islands? Do you think you would like to go there?
I think I would love to go to the cook Island I learned so much about the cook Island it is fun to do it bye bye
DeleteKia ora Marsali,its Daisy and Aria here!
ReplyDeleteWe liked the way you used your own words and put some cool videos.
We think you could put more info of your own instead of a lot of videos. Ok.
Next time you could look at what the internet says and then put it in your own words.
Why did you put a lot of videos on your slide??????