I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Marsali. I like the way you set up all the different scenes and add new characters. You must have a good collection of toys. Just remember to add your sentence punctuation like full stops at the end of sentences. I will be back to see the next episode.
You've reminded me that I still have a job to do! I'm on the case. I love the way you are creating your own scenes rather than just finding someone else's online.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Marsali.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you set up all the different scenes and add new characters. You must have a good collection of toys. Just remember to add your sentence punctuation like full stops at the end of sentences. I will be back to see the next episode.
You've reminded me that I still have a job to do! I'm on the case. I love the way you are creating your own scenes rather than just finding someone else's online.
ReplyDeleteVery cool Marsali, did you do this yourself? Impressive! Looking forward to seeing the next episode.
ReplyDeleteyes I did do it all myself my Mum lent me her phone
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I can't wait for number 3! Good job Marsali!
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