I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Marsali, it is Xaviar here again from HPS. I thought your stories were very interesting and I liked how you wrote them. I learnt a lot about you from reading them. Maybe next time you could make it a little bit easier to read as I found it hard to scroll through. Have a nice weekend. Bye from Xaviar.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Marsali, it is Xaviar here again from HPS. I thought your stories were very interesting and I liked how you wrote them. I learnt a lot about you from reading them. Maybe next time you could make it a little bit easier to read as I found it hard to scroll through. Have a nice weekend. Bye from Xaviar.
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